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Re: [nvo3] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-nvo3-encap-10

Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com> Mon, 20 November 2023 04:59 UTC

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From: Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com>
Date: Sun, 19 Nov 2023 23:58:39 -0500
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To: Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com>
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Subject: Re: [nvo3] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-nvo3-encap-10
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Hi Meral,

Thanks for noting the two typos you found below. I have fixed them in my
working copy so they will be fixed the next time I upload a revision.

Donald
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On Fri, Nov 17, 2023 at 9:14 PM Meral Shirazipour via Datatracker <
noreply@ietf.org> wrote:

> Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
> Review result: Ready with Nits
>
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
> by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
> like any other last call comments.
>
> For more information, please see the FAQ at
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> <https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/gen/GenArtFAQ>.
>
> Document: draft-ietf-nvo3-encap-10
> Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
> Review Date: 2023-11-17
> IETF LC End Date: 2023-11-18
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
>
> Summary: This draft is almost ready to be published as Informational RFC.
>
> Major issues:
>
> Minor issues:
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> Nits/editorial comments:
> -[Page 7], "Broadcase"-->"Broadcast"
>
> - [Page 10], "svailable"-->"available"
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