Re: [nwcrg] Tsvart last call review of draft-irtf-nwcrg-coding-and-congestion-09

Colin Perkins <csp@csperkins.org> Tue, 04 January 2022 19:26 UTC

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From: Colin Perkins <csp@csperkins.org>
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Subject: Re: [nwcrg] Tsvart last call review of draft-irtf-nwcrg-coding-and-congestion-09
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Hi Mirja – thank you for the review!
Colin



> On 4 Jan 2022, at 14:16, Mirja Kühlewind via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
> 
> Reviewer: Mirja Kühlewind
> Review result: Ready
> 
> This document has been reviewed as part of the transport area review team's
> ongoing effort to review key IETF documents. These comments were written
> primarily for the transport area directors, but are copied to the document's
> authors and WG to allow them to address any issues raised and also to the IETF
> discussion list for information.
> 
> When done at the time of IETF Last Call, the authors should consider this
> review as part of the last-call comments they receive. Please always CC
> tsv-art@ietf.org if you reply to or forward this review.
> 
> This document is well-written and provides a good discussion of the topic.
> There are no additional transport-related concerns, e.g. all concerns are covered
> and discussed. 
> 
> I recommend to also forward the RG last call to ICCRG and maybe even tsvwg,
> for potential additional reviews but, more important, awareness.
> 
> draft-singh-rmcat-adaptive-fec might be another draft to refer to (e.g. in section
> 4.3). I know this draft is expired and I assume the authors might be aware of it, but
> I found find it very relevant. However, that just my personal view.
> 
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