Re: [OAUTH-WG] Draft -19

Mike Jones <Michael.Jones@microsoft.com> Mon, 25 July 2011 16:10 UTC

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From: Mike Jones <Michael.Jones@microsoft.com>
To: Eran Hammer-Lahav <eran@hueniverse.com>, OAuth WG <oauth@ietf.org>
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A few editorial points about references:
  - the draft is referencing an old draft of the bearer token spec (-04), rather than the current version (-06),
  - the draft is referencing an old draft  of the SAML bearer spec (-03), rather than the current version (-04),
  - the draft is not referencing the assertions spec draft-ietf-oauth-assertions-00, which would make sense in Section 4.5 (Extensions)

Also, the example in 4.5 should be updated to match the current SAML bearer spec:

   grant_type=http%3A%2F%2Foauth.net%2Fgrant_type%2Fsaml%2F2.0%2F
   bearer&assertion=PEFzc2VydGlvbiBJc3N1ZUluc3RhbnQ9IjIwMTEtMDUtM
   [...omitted for brevity...]V0aG5TdGF0ZW1lbnQ-PC9Bc3NlcnRpb24-

                                                            Thanks,
                                                            -- Mike

From: oauth-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:oauth-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Eran Hammer-Lahav
Sent: Monday, July 25, 2011 1:07 AM
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Subject: [OAUTH-WG] Draft -19

Draft 19 includes all the feedback received for -18:

* Closes issues 15-19
* Moved client profiles to section 2.1 from 10
* New text for 'Code Injection and Input Validation'
* A few minor editorial clarifications

There are two open issues (20, 21) which are minor editorial requests, and the request being discussed on the list to change the public/private client type terminology to something else.

I consider draft -19 to be ready for WGLC immediately.

Thanks,

EHL