Re: [OAUTH-WG] AD review of draft-ietf-oauth-amr-values

Kathleen Moriarty <kathleen.moriarty.ietf@gmail.com> Mon, 14 November 2016 07:37 UTC

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From: Kathleen Moriarty <kathleen.moriarty.ietf@gmail.com>
Date: Mon, 14 Nov 2016 02:37:13 -0500
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Subject: Re: [OAUTH-WG] AD review of draft-ietf-oauth-amr-values
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Thanks, Mike.

I'll look at the shepherd report and see if it is ready to start last call.

Best regards,
Kathleen

On Mon, Nov 14, 2016 at 2:29 AM, Mike Jones <Michael.Jones@microsoft.com>
wrote:

> Thanks for your review, Kathleen.  Draft -04 has been published to address
> these comments.  Actions taken are described inline.
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>                                                        -- Mike
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> *From:* OAuth [mailto:oauth-bounces@ietf.org] *On Behalf Of *Kathleen
> Moriarty
> *Sent:* Saturday, October 29, 2016 3:51 AM
> *To:* oauth@ietf.org
> *Subject:* [OAUTH-WG] AD review of draft-ietf-oauth-amr-values
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> Hello,
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> I reviewed draft-ietf-oauth-amr-values and have a few comments.  First,
> thanks for your work on this draft!
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> Several of the authentication methods mentioned are typically used (or
> recommended for use) as a second or third factor.  I see in section 3 that
> multiple methods can be contained in the claim.  I'd like to see an example
> of single and multiple authentication methods being represented.  Was it a
> WG decision to leave out examples?
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> ·       Added “amr” claim examples with both single and multiple values.
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> In the Privacy considerations section, I think it should be made clear
> that the actual credentials are not part of this specification to avoid
> additional privacy concerns for biometric data.
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> ·       Clarified that the actual credentials referenced are not part of
> this specification to avoid additional privacy concerns for biometric data.
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> Section 5, shouldn't a pointer be here to the attacks on OAuth 2.0 as well?
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> ·       Clarified that the OAuth 2.0 Threat Model [RFC6819] applies to
> applications using this specification.
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> Thank you.
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> --
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> Best regards,
>
> Kathleen
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Best regards,
Kathleen