[OAUTH-WG] Doc Shepherd Review - OAuth 2.0 Authorization Server Issuer Identification

Rifaat Shekh-Yusef <rifaat.s.ietf@gmail.com> Sat, 04 September 2021 14:21 UTC

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Subject: [OAUTH-WG] Doc Shepherd Review - OAuth 2.0 Authorization Server Issuer Identification
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Hi Karsten, Daniel,

As the document shepherd, I have reviewed the document and I have the
following comments on draft-ietf-oauth-iss-auth-resp-01 version:


Section 2.4, paragraph 3, first sentence:

"If clients interact with both authorization servers supporting this
   specification and authorization servers not supporting this
   specification, clients SHOULD store the information which
   authorization server supports the "iss" parameter."

Why is this a SHOULD?


"Clients MUST
   reject authorization responses without the "iss" parameter from
   authorization servers which do support the parameter according to the
   client's configuration."

What should the client do when it receives a response with "iss" parameter
from an authorization server that did not indicate its support for this
parameter?


Section 7

RFC6479 should be replaced with *RFC6749*


Regards,
  Rifaat