Re: [OAUTH-WG] Shepherd Writeup for OAuth 2.0 for Native Apps

William Denniss <wdenniss@google.com> Thu, 13 October 2016 01:32 UTC

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Subject: Re: [OAUTH-WG] Shepherd Writeup for OAuth 2.0 for Native Apps
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Thank you for the write-up Hannes.

Version 04 adds an IANA consideration section as promised. In reviewing the
IANA considerations, I added a normative reference to RFC7595 where private
use of the URI namespace is defined (and which were compliant with already
– but I made that more clear as well).

RFC6819 is now informatively referenced.

I went over the ID-nits checklist and cleaned up some of the less stable
informative references based on that. I also did a general editing pass to
clean up some of the rough edges.

I believe all 3 points are addressed now.


On Tue, Oct 11, 2016 at 12:06 PM, John Bradley <ve7jtb@ve7jtb.com> wrote:

> A updated draft with the IANA section and comments addressed will be out
> shortly.
>
> We will try to get it out today or early tomorrow.
>
> John B.
>
>
> On Oct 11, 2016, at 3:33 PM, Brian Campbell <bcampbell@pingidentity.com>
> wrote:
>
> I believe there are a few small WGLC comments outstanding too.
>
> On Mon, Oct 10, 2016 at 4:30 AM, Hannes Tschofenig <
> hannes.tschofenig@gmx.net> wrote:
>
>> Hi all,
>>
>> Here is the shepherd writeup for the native apps document:
>> https://github.com/hannestschofenig/tschofenig-ids/blob/
>> master/shepherd-writeups/Writeup_OAuth_NativeApps.txt
>>
>> There are only a few minor things missing:
>>
>> 1) I haven't received a response from William on my IPR confirmation
>> question (as far as I can tell):
>> https://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/oauth/current/msg16672.html
>>
>> 2) The document lacks an IANA Considerations section. Please add one and
>> indicate that there are no actions for IANA.
>>
>> 3) There is an unused reference in the document, namely RFC 6819
>>
>> Ciao
>> Hannes
>>
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