[OAUTH-WG] bike-shedding the SPOP into
Brian Campbell <bcampbell@pingidentity.com> Fri, 14 November 2014 15:28 UTC
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From: Brian Campbell <bcampbell@pingidentity.com>
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Subject: [OAUTH-WG] bike-shedding the SPOP into
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In the into, I'd suggest changing, "The code verifier is created for every authorization request..." to "A unique code verifier is created for every authorization request..."
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