[OAUTH-WG] Editorial: draft-ietf-oauth-jwsreq-16
Kaoru Maeda <kaorumaeda.ml@gmail.com> Wed, 18 July 2018 13:32 UTC
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Subject: [OAUTH-WG] Editorial: draft-ietf-oauth-jwsreq-16
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Hi, I have some questions on jwsreq-16 (maybe editorial). * Section 5.2.1 In the request_uri example, what does fragment part (#Gku...) mean? https://tfp.example.org/request.jwt#GkurKxf5T0Y-mnPFCHqWOMiZi4VS138cQO_V7PZHAdM Does this fragment correspond to the entropy mentioned in the text? * Section 10.4 "redirect_uri" should read "request_uri" * Section 10.4.x There are two media types mentioned: application/jose, and /json. Earlier in the document I found application/jwt. It seems to make sense even when all of these are application/jwt. Does application/jose specifically mean JWS/JWE? Is these difference intentional? Regards, Kaoru Maeda
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