Re: [OAUTH-WG] OAuth 2.0 Bearer Token Specification Draft -10

Mike Jones <Michael.Jones@microsoft.com> Thu, 20 October 2011 07:14 UTC

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From: Mike Jones <Michael.Jones@microsoft.com>
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Can you recommend specific wording changes to address both issues?

				-- Mike

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From: Julian Reschke [mailto:julian.reschke@gmx.de] 
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Subject: Re: [OAUTH-WG] OAuth 2.0 Bearer Token Specification Draft -10

On 2011-10-20 01:38, Mike Jones wrote:
> Draft 10
> <http://self-issued.info/docs/draft-ietf-oauth-v2-bearer-10.html> of 
> the OAuth 2.0 Bearer Token Specification 
> <http://self-issued.info/docs/draft-ietf-oauth-v2-bearer.html> has 
> been published, which incorporates consensus decisions reached since 
> Working Group Last Call feedback. It closes all open issues. It 
> contains the following changes:
> ...

This is better.

I still see problems though.

Section 2.2 specifies to use application/x-www-form-urlencoded encoding, but doesn't mention the character encoding to use. This may be a non-issue now for scopes, but it would be for extension parameters.

Section 2.4 still uses quoted parameters without using the quoted-string constructs. This leaves implementers in the dark about whether they can use existing quoted-string parsers or not.

Best regards, Julian