Re: [OAUTH-WG] typo

Mike Jones <Michael.Jones@microsoft.com> Sat, 26 September 2015 16:30 UTC

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From: Mike Jones <Michael.Jones@microsoft.com>
To: Mike Schwartz <mike@gluu.org>, "oauth@ietf.org" <oauth@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [OAUTH-WG] typo
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It took me a bit to figure out which spec this comment was about.  The sentence Mike cited occurs in https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-oauth-pop-architecture-03.

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From: OAuth [mailto:oauth-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Mike Schwartz
Sent: Friday, September 25, 2015 2:31 PM
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Subject: [OAUTH-WG] typo

You have a little typo in the abstract:

"bearer tokens must to be protected from disclosure in transit and at rest."

I think you mean "must be protected"

- Mike

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