[OAUTH-WG] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC6749 (7716)

RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> Wed, 29 November 2023 16:56 UTC

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The following errata report has been submitted for RFC6749,
"The OAuth 2.0 Authorization Framework".

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You may review the report below and at:
https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid7716

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Type: Editorial
Reported by: Alex Wilson <hello@alexwilson.io>

Section: 4.2.2

Original Text
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   For example, the authorization server redirects the user-agent by
   sending the following HTTP response (with extra line breaks for
   display purposes only):

     HTTP/1.1 302 Found
     Location: http://example.com/cb#access_token=2YotnFZFEjr1zCsicMWpAA
               &state=xyz&token_type=example&expires_in=3600


Corrected Text
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   For example, the authorization server redirects the user-agent by
   sending the following HTTP response (with extra line breaks for
   display purposes only):

     HTTP/1.1 302 Found
     Location: http://client.example.com/cb?access_token=2YotnFZFEjr1zCsicMWpAA
               &state=xyz&token_type=example&expires_in=3600


Notes
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- Host example.com should be client.example.com to be consistent with other examples.
- A hash is used for the query parameters when a question mark should have been used.

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RFC6749 (draft-ietf-oauth-v2-31)
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Title               : The OAuth 2.0 Authorization Framework
Publication Date    : October 2012
Author(s)           : D. Hardt, Ed.
Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
Source              : Web Authorization Protocol
Area                : Security
Stream              : IETF
Verifying Party     : IESG