[OAUTH-WG] Gorry Fairhurst's No Record on draft-ietf-oauth-identity-chaining-12: (with COMMENT)

[Gorry Fairhurst via Datatracker <[e-mail]>]

Gorry Fairhurst has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-oauth-identity-chaining-12: No Record

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COMMENT:
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Thank you for the work that has been put into this document. I do not see any
transport-protocol related concerns.

However, I would have found it helpful to have read a more informative abstract.

I would  expect this to explain that request information needs to be preserved
when a request crosses one or more trust domains, known as "chaining", and to
mention the combination of OAuth 2.0 Token Exchange and the JWT Profile for
OAuth 2.0 Client Authentication and Authorization Grants. Please consider
adding one or two more lines of text.

Gorry