Re: [Ohai] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-ohai-svcb-config-06: (with COMMENT)

["Eric Vyncke (evyncke)" <[e-mail]>]

Dear authors, 

I would like to apologize for the presence of the DISCUSS section in my ballot. Monday morning, not enough coffee, ... and I left the 'DISCUSS' parts from my ballot template.

So, please ignore the DISCUSS related sentences as they should not be there.

-éric

On 02/10/2023, 10:59, "iesg on behalf of Éric Vyncke via Datatracker" <[e-mail] <mailto:[e-mail]> on behalf of [e-mail] <mailto:[e-mail]>> wrote:


Éric Vyncke has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-ohai-svcb-config-06: No Objection


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# Éric Vyncke, INT AD, comments for draft-ietf-ohai-svcb-config-06


Thank you for the work put into this document.


Please find below one blocking DISCUSS points (easy to address), some
non-blocking COMMENT points (but replies would be appreciated even if only for
my own education), and some nits.


Special thanks to Shivan Kaul Sahib for the shepherd's detailed write-up
including the WG consensus ***and*** the justification of the intended status.


Please note that Ralf Weber is the DNS directorate reviewer and you may want to
consider this dns-dir review as well when it will be available (no need to wait
for it though):
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ohai-svcb-config/reviewrequest/18156/ <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ohai-svcb-config/reviewrequest/18156/>
(and I have read Tommy's reply to Ralf's Last Call review)


I hope that this review helps to improve the document,


Regards,


-éric


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# COMMENTS


## Section 1


Should DNR also be mentioned (if applicable) ? Esp as this I-D contains section
4.2.2.


## Section 3


I would expect a direct object in ` it "upgrades"`, i.e., what is upgraded ?


## Section 4.2.2


Suggest to also add examples as in the DDR/HTTP sections above.


## Section 5


I hesitated to raise a DISCUSS level on this one... Should normative language
be used in `By default, the gateway for a target is defined as a well-known
resource ([WELLKNOWN]) on the target, "/.well-known/ohttp-gateway".` ? I.e.,
'by default' is rather vague.