[OPS-DIR]draft-ietf-ntp-over-ptp-05 ietf last call Opsdir review

[Tony Li via Datatracker <[e-mail]>]

Document: draft-ietf-ntp-over-ptp
Title: NTP Over PTP
Reviewer: Tony Li
Review result: Ready

OPSDIR Last Call Review of draft-ietf-ntp-over-ptp

Reviewer: Tony Li
Status: Ready

Disclaimer: I have been an NTP user since the 1980's, but am a novice
at PTP. I have reviewed the WG exchanges on this draft. I'm a Juniper
employee, but I have nothing to do with Juniper's implementation of
this draft.

Overall: I found this very straightforward and pretty well
written. There's a whole bunch of editorial issues, and I don't have
the energy to attack them all. I will let the RFC editor do their job.
>From an operational perspective, this is an excellent idea which will
seem strange at first (don't cross the streams!), but ultimately makes
good sense. Assuming a sane configuration and reasonable debugging in
the endpoints, this should be straightforward to manage.

Details:

Section 1:

Paragraph 1:
s/supported/support/
s/processing/processing,/ (again in paragrph 3)
s/on accuracy/on the accuracy/

Paragraph 5:
s/transport/transports/