Re: [OPSAWG] AD review of draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-iot-dns-considerations-08

Michael Richardson <mcr+ietf@sandelman.ca> Mon, 04 March 2024 16:14 UTC

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To: "Rob Wilton (rwilton)" <rwilton@cisco.com>
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Subject: Re: [OPSAWG] AD review of draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-iot-dns-considerations-08
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Rob Wilton (rwilton) <rwilton@cisco.com> wrote:
    > The TD;LR is I think that your latest changes are good and I’ll send
    > -12 to IETF LC.

I think that I got the rest of your nits as well in the version I posted
yesterday.

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Michael Richardson <mcr+IETF@sandelman.ca>   . o O ( IPv6 IøT consulting )
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