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[OPSAWG] Serious concerns with draft-ietf-opsawg-tacacs-06

Alan DeKok <aland@deployingradius.com> Tue, 09 May 2017 17:41 UTC

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Subject: [OPSAWG] Serious concerns with draft-ietf-opsawg-tacacs-06
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  I've taken a look at the latest draft, and have some serious concerns.

  Specifically, large chunks of the Security Considerations sections appear to have been lifted from my post to the list:

https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/opsawg/tU2wBFIV4MkpKChWn6EvrqeZtXU

  There are minor edits, but multiple sentences are copied word for word.  Sentences which don't occur in the -05 draft, but do appear in my review, and subsequently are copied to the -06 draft with minor edits.

  Multiple paragraphs are copied with only minor edits.  The total amounts to about a page of text.

  While I appreciate that the document is improving, blatant copying of my text without attribution is entirely inappropriate.

  What are the chairs recommendations?

  Alan DeKok.

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