Re: [OPSAWG] [IANA #1124329] expert review for draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-bgp-community (ipfix)
li zhenqiang <li_zhenqiang@hotmail.com> Fri, 19 October 2018 12:26 UTC
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From: li zhenqiang <li_zhenqiang@hotmail.com>
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Thread-Topic: [IANA #1124329] expert review for draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-bgp-community (ipfix)
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Subject: Re: [OPSAWG] [IANA #1124329] expert review for draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-bgp-community (ipfix)
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Many thanks for the expert review. A new version, version 10, has been uploaded to incorporate all the comments. Best Regards, Zhenqiang Li ________________________________ li_zhenqiang@hotmail.com From: Sabrina Tanamal via RT<mailto:drafts-expert-review@iana.org> Date: 2018-10-15 23:50 To: CC: li_zhenqiang@hotmail.com<mailto:li_zhenqiang@hotmail.com>; gurong_cmcc@outlook.com<mailto:gurong_cmcc@outlook.com>; jie.dong@huawei.com<mailto:jie.dong@huawei.com>; jclarke@cisco.com<mailto:jclarke@cisco.com>; zhoutianran@huawei.com<mailto:zhoutianran@huawei.com>; ibagdona@gmail.com<mailto:ibagdona@gmail.com>; warren@kumari.net<mailto:warren@kumari.net> Subject: [IANA #1124329] expert review for draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-bgp-community (ipfix) Dear Authors, Please see the comments from the expert below: I'd like to tighten the descriptions so they can stand alone: * "zero or more BGP communities" to "basicList of zero or more bgpCommunity Information Elements" (x2) * "zero or more BGP Extended Communities" to "basicList of zero or more bgpExtendedCommunity Information Elements" (x2) * "zero or more BGP Large Communities" to "basicList of zero or more bgpLargeCommunity Information Elements" (x2) Note that the information in sections 4.1 - 4.3, 5.1 - 5.3, and 6.1 - 6.3 duplicates the information in section 9. I've suggested to the AD and shepherd that the duplication be removed. ---- Best regards, Sabrina Tanamal Senior IANA Servies Specialist
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