[OPSAWG] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-acceptable-urls-11: (with COMMENT)

Murray Kucherawy via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Thu, 04 April 2024 07:38 UTC

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Subject: [OPSAWG] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-acceptable-urls-11: (with COMMENT)

Murray Kucherawy has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-acceptable-urls-11: No Objection

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Thanks to Darrel Miller for his ARTART review.

Like Eric, I also found the sudden writing style shift in Section 5.3.1 to be a
bit jarring.  Some intro text or a more clear title might be better here.

[OPSAWG] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft… Murray Kucherawy via Datatracker