Re: [OPSAWG] Rtgdir last call review of draft-mm-wg-effect-encrypt-13

[Kathleen Moriarty <[e-mail]>]

Ines,

Thank you very much for your review!  We're working on the comments
received and the nits you found will be addressed and are much
appreciated.

Best regards,
Kathleen

On Mon, Dec 11, 2017 at 4:59 PM, Ines Robles
<[e-mail]> wrote:
> Reviewer: Ines Robles
> Review result: Ready
>
> RtgDir review: draft-mm-wg-effect-encrypt-13.txt
>
> Hello,
>
> I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this draft. The
> Routing Directorate seeks to review all routing or routing-related drafts as
> they pass through IETF last call and IESG review, and sometimes on special
> request. The purpose of the review is to provide assistance to the Routing ADs.
> For more information about the Routing Directorate, please see
> http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDir
>
> Although these comments are primarily for the use of the Routing ADs, it would
> be helpful if you could consider them along with any other IETF Last Call
> comments that you receive, and strive to resolve them through discussion or by
> updating the draft.
>
> Document: Effect of Pervasive Encryption on Operators -
> draft-mm-wg-effect-encrypt-13 Reviewer: Ines Robles Review Date: 12-11-2017
> Intended status: Informational
>
> Summary:
> This document discusses current security and network management practices to
> help guide protocol development in support of manageable, secure networks.
>
> The draft is ready, few typos found.
>
> Comments:
>
> I believe the draft is technically good. This document is well written and
> clear to understand.
>
> Major Issues:
>
> No major issues found.
>
> Minor Issues:
>
> Section 2:
>
> "... Following the Snowden revelations,..." => It would be nice to add some
> references here
>
> Section 2.2.5:
> "DRM..."=> I would expand it to  Digital Rights Management (DRM)
>
> Section 6:
>
> inlcudes=> includes
>
> Section 6.1:
> "information For example" => period missing?
>
> Section 6.2:
> "soltuions" -> solutions
>
> Section 7.1 title:
> "Encypted" => Encrypted
>
>



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Best regards,
Kathleen