Re: [OPSAWG] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC9291 (7162)

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Hi Nikolai, all, 

Thank you for reporting this. 

This editorial erratum should be accepted. Thanks.

Cheers,
Med

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> Cc : [e-mail]; BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET
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> Objet : [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC9291 (7162)
> 
> The following errata report has been submitted for RFC9291, "A
> YANG Network Data Model for Layer 2 VPNs".
> 
> --------------------------------------
> You may review the report below and at:
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid7162
> 
> --------------------------------------
> Type: Editorial
> Reported by: Nikolai Malykh <[e-mail]>
> 
> Section: 9
> 
> Original Text
> -------------
>    'ethernet-segments' and 'vpn-services':  An attacker who is
> able to
>       access network nodes can undertake various attacks, such as
>       deleting a running L2VPN service, interrupting all the
> traffic of
>       a client.  In addition, an attacker may modify the
> attributes of a
>       running service (e.g., QoS, bandwidth) or an ES, leading to
>       malfunctioning of the service and therefore to SLA
> violations.  In
>       addition, an attacker could attempt to create an L2VPN
> service,
>       add a new network access, or intercept/redirect the traffic
> to a
>       non-authorized node.  In addition to using NACM to prevent
>       authorized access, such activity can be detected by
> adequately
>       monitoring and tracking network configuration changes.
> 
> 
> Corrected Text
> --------------
>    'ethernet-segments' and 'vpn-services':  An attacker who is
> able to
>       access network nodes can undertake various attacks, such as
>       deleting a running L2VPN service, interrupting all the
> traffic of
>       a client.  In addition, an attacker may modify the
> attributes of a
>       running service (e.g., QoS, bandwidth) or an ES, leading to
>       malfunctioning of the service and therefore to SLA
> violations.  In
>       addition, an attacker could attempt to create an L2VPN
> service,
>       add a new network access, or intercept/redirect the traffic
> to a
>       non-authorized node.  In addition to using NACM to prevent
>       unauthorized access, such activity can be detected by
> adequately
>       monitoring and tracking network configuration changes.
> 
> 
> Notes
> -----
> Typo in last sentence, should be "unauthorized".
> 
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> RFC9291 (draft-ietf-opsawg-l2nm-19)
> --------------------------------------
> Title               : A YANG Network Data Model for Layer 2 VPNs
> Publication Date    : September 2022
> Author(s)           : M. Boucadair, Ed., O. Gonzalez de Dios, Ed.,
> S. Barguil, L. Munoz
> Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
> Source              : Operations and Management Area Working Group
> Area                : Operations and Management
> Stream              : IETF
> Verifying Party     : IESG

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