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Subject: Re: [OPSAWG] WG LC: L2NM document: draft-ietf-opsawg-l2nm
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Hi all, 

As part of WGLC, we also reflected some of the comments raised during the IESG review of L3NM/common in the L3NM to save us some cycles. This is more about clarification, fixing nits, adding sub-section for better readability, etc. The changes can be tracked at: https://github.com/IETF-OPSAWG-WG/lxnm/tree/master/I-D-L2NM, fwiw. 

Comments are still more than welcome. 

Cheers,
Med

> -----Message d'origine-----
> De : OPSAWG <opsawg-bounces@ietf.org> De la part de Joe Clarke (jclarke)
> Envoyé : jeudi 16 septembre 2021 17:59
> À : opsawg@ietf.org
> Objet : [OPSAWG] WG LC: L2NM document: draft-ietf-opsawg-l2nm
> 
> Hello, WG.  We would like to kick off a WG LC for the draft-ietf-opsawg-
> l2nm draft.  As you review it, I would encourage looking back at draft-
> ietf-opsawg-vpn-common to make sure everything lines up well.  We'd like
> to give two weeks for review, with LC closing on October 1.
> 
> @Adrian Farrel you were gracious enough to act as shepherd for the L3NM
> and vpn-common drafts.  Would you be willing to shepherd this one as well?
> 
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-opsawg-l2nm
> 
> Thanks.
> 
> Joe
> 
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