[OPSAWG]Re: Revising draft-ietf-opsawg-pcaplinktype
Michael Tuexen <michael.tuexen@lurchi.franken.de> Sun, 31 August 2025 17:11 UTC
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> On 30. Aug 2025, at 23:35, Guy Harris <gharris@sonic.net> wrote: > > On Aug 30, 2025, at 2:07 PM, Guy Harris <gharris@sonic.net> wrote: > >> https://author-tools.ietf.org/api/idnits?url=https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-opsawg-pcaplinktype-11.txt >> >> which I presume is at least partially auto-generated and thus based on the current draft, has some nits it reports. >> >> I'll look at those. > > So we have: > > draft-ietf-opsawg-pcaplinktype-11.txt: > -(1756): Line appears to be too long, but this could be caused by non-ascii characters in UTF-8 encoding > > Yes, it's non-ASCII characters in UTF-8 encoding, i.e. "Tüxen, M." > > I seem to remember *some* discussion of the use of non-ASCII characters for names with diacritical marks that concluded with "it's probably OK", perhaps because we found RFCs that used them, but I don't remember the details. > > If it's an issue, we could go with "Tuexen, M.". > > Checking nits according to https://www.ietf.org/id-info/1id-guidelines.txt: > ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- > > == There are 2 instances of lines with non-ascii characters in the document. > > Both are from ü from "Tüxen, M.", as per the above. Hi Guy, please just ignore them... I always have this. I changed using Tuexen on Tüxen by advice from the RFC editor a long time ago. Best regards Michael > > Checking nits according to https://www.ietf.org/id-info/checklist : > ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- > > ** The document seems to lack a both a reference to RFC 2119 and the > recommended RFC 2119 boilerplate, even if it appears to use RFC 2119 > keywords. > > RFC 2119 keyword, line 130: '... 11-49 and 52-97 MUST not be assigned....' > > "{::boilerplate bcp14}" appears to be missing from draft-ietf-opsawg-pcaplinktype.md, although it's in draft-ietf-opsawg-pcap.md and draft-ietf-opsawg-pcapng.md. > > It was in earlier Git revisions; I put it back. > > > Miscellaneous warnings: > ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- > > == Line 1067 has weird spacing: '...ription fd.io...' > > No weirder than any of the other "Description" lines, all of which have two spaces after "Description". "fd.io" is the name of an organization; that may have confused idnits. > > == Using lowercase 'not' together with uppercase 'MUST', 'SHALL', 'SHOULD', > or 'RECOMMENDED' is not an accepted usage according to RFC 2119. Please > use uppercase 'NOT' together with RFC 2119 keywords (if that is what you > mean). > > Found 'MUST not' in this paragraph: > > * Values from 0 to 65000 are allocated following a First-Come > First-Served policy (Section 4.4 of [RFC8126]). Values in the ranges > 0-10, 50-51, and 98-301 are already assigned; values in the ranges 11-49 > and 52-97 MUST not be assigned. > > Fixed to be "MUST NOT". > > > Checking references for intended status: Informational > ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- > > == Outdated reference: A later version (-04) exists of > draft-ietf-opsawg-pcapng-03 > > That's probably just the result of the -11 draft having been generated before draft-ietf-opsawg-pcapng-04 was published - the draft number is automatically generated by the process of building the documents from the Markdown source. > > _______________________________________________ > OPSAWG mailing list -- opsawg@ietf.org > To unsubscribe send an email to opsawg-leave@ietf.org
- [OPSAWG]Revising draft-ietf-opsawg-pcaplinktype Joe Clarke (jclarke)
- [OPSAWG]Re: Revising draft-ietf-opsawg-pcaplinkty… Michael Richardson
- [OPSAWG]Re: Revising draft-ietf-opsawg-pcaplinkty… Guy Harris
- [OPSAWG]Re: Revising draft-ietf-opsawg-pcaplinkty… Guy Harris
- [OPSAWG]Re: Revising draft-ietf-opsawg-pcaplinkty… Guy Harris
- [OPSAWG]Re: Revising draft-ietf-opsawg-pcaplinkty… Seth David Schoen
- [OPSAWG]Re: Revising draft-ietf-opsawg-pcaplinkty… Guy Harris
- [OPSAWG]Re: Revising draft-ietf-opsawg-pcaplinkty… Michael Tuexen
- [OPSAWG]Re: Revising draft-ietf-opsawg-pcaplinkty… Guy Harris
- [OPSAWG]Re: Revising draft-ietf-opsawg-pcaplinkty… Guy Harris
- [OPSAWG]Re: Revising draft-ietf-opsawg-pcaplinkty… Michael Tuexen