Re: [OPSAWG] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-bgp-community-07
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From: li zhenqiang <li_zhenqiang@hotmail.com>
To: "Joel M. Halpern" <jmh@joelhalpern.com>, "gen-art@ietf.org" <gen-art@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [OPSAWG] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-bgp-community-07
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Dear Mr. Halpern, Thank you very much for your review and the discussion in the previous mails. The discussion improved this document alot. Best Regards, Zhenqiang Li ________________________________ li_zhenqiang@hotmail.com From: Joel Halpern<mailto:jmh@joelhalpern.com> Date: 2018-09-15 07:21 To: gen-art@ietf.org<mailto:gen-art@ietf.org> CC: draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-bgp-community.all@ietf.org<mailto:draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-bgp-community.all@ietf.org>; ietf@ietf.org<mailto:ietf@ietf.org>; opsawg@ietf.org<mailto:opsawg@ietf.org> Subject: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-bgp-community-07 Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-bgp-community-07 Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review Date: 2018-09-14 IETF LC End Date: 2018-09-24 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard Major issues: While I am still concerned (see my previous reviews) that this may well be the wrong answer to the wrong question, the authors have done a good job of explaining what they are doing and justifying why in some situations it will be useful. That seems the appropriate standard, and thus the document is ready for publication. Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments:
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