Re: [OPSAWG] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-opsawg-hmac-sha-2-usm-snmp-05

Johannes Merkle <johannes.merkle@secunet.com> Mon, 20 April 2015 14:27 UTC

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Subject: Re: [OPSAWG] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-opsawg-hmac-sha-2-usm-snmp-05
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another suggestion:

I'd linke to change the title from

 HMAC-SHA-2 Authentication Protocols in USM for SNMP

to

 HMAC-SHA-2 Authentication Protocols in USM for SNMPv3
                                                    ^^
Do you agree?


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Johannes