[OPSAWG] draft-ietf-opsawg-l3sm-l3nm YANG Doc review

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From: "Joe Clarke (jclarke)" <jclarke@cisco.com>
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I’m getting to the virtual interim TODO items, and this was first on my list.  I have requested a Yang Doctor review for revision -03 of this draft based on the author’s request that it has reached a state of stability.

Joe