Re: [OPSAWG] Document Shepherd write-up for draft-ietf-opsawg-finding-geofeeds
George Michaelson <ggm@algebras.org> Wed, 17 February 2021 06:22 UTC
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Date: Wed, 17 Feb 2021 16:21:55 +1000
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Subject: Re: [OPSAWG] Document Shepherd write-up for draft-ietf-opsawg-finding-geofeeds
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This resolved all but two downref issues: ** Downref: Normative reference to an Informational RFC: RFC 5485 ** Downref: Normative reference to an Informational RFC: RFC 8805 As discussed, I think these cannot resolve, and will have to be discussed out with the AD and IESG during review. There is the observation it has no worked examples in V6. Since it states very clearly all IPv4 assumes IPv6, I think this is not significant. If it turns out others disagree its a low bar change. I see no reason to pre-empt, since it is covered by text in the draft. cheers -George On Wed, Feb 17, 2021 at 4:05 PM Randy Bush <randy@psg.com> wrote: > > > please push the 03. I think it is very likely to close all the low-level Nits. > > done > > randy
- [OPSAWG] Document Shepherd write-up for draft-iet… George Michaelson
- Re: [OPSAWG] Document Shepherd write-up for draft… George Michaelson
- Re: [OPSAWG] Document Shepherd write-up for draft… Randy Bush
- Re: [OPSAWG] Document Shepherd write-up for draft… George Michaelson
- Re: [OPSAWG] Document Shepherd write-up for draft… Randy Bush
- Re: [OPSAWG] Document Shepherd write-up for draft… George Michaelson
- Re: [OPSAWG] Document Shepherd write-up for draft… Joe Clarke (jclarke)