[OPSAWG] Paul Wouters' No Objection on draft-ietf-opsawg-service-assurance-yang-10: (with COMMENT)

Paul Wouters via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Thu, 15 December 2022 00:01 UTC

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Subject: [OPSAWG] Paul Wouters' No Objection on draft-ietf-opsawg-service-assurance-yang-10: (with COMMENT)
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Paul Wouters has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-opsawg-service-assurance-yang-10: No Objection

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I have not much to add to my esteemed collegue's Éric::Vyncke/128 review, two
nits:

  |     +--rw under-maintenance!
  |     |  +--rw contact    string

This could use a freeform field or duration field to hold information about
expected maintenance time, as that would be the main question anyone could have
for the contact person :)

  description
    "This module extends the ietf-service-assurance-device module to
     add specific support for devices of ACME Corporation. ";

I would somehow put in the Example word in there to avoid anyone thinking that
this is a real definition. I know it is stated before, but implementers just
scanning code might miss it :)