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From: "Joe Clarke (jclarke)" <jclarke@cisco.com>
To: Mehmet Ersue <mersue@gmail.com>
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Subject: Re: [OPSAWG] [OPS-DIR] Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-sdi-03
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Thank you for the OPS DIR review, Mehmet.

Joe

> On Feb 18, 2020, at 11:56, Mehmet Ersue via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
> 
> Reviewer: Mehmet Ersue
> Review result: Has Nits
> 
> I reviewed the document "Secure Device Install (draft-ietf-opsawg-sdi-03) as
> part of the Operational directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF
> documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written primarily
> for the benefit of the operational area directors.  Document editors and WG
> chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments.
> 
> Intended status: Informational
> Current IESG state: I-D Exists
> IANA State: N/A
> 
> Summary:
> The document extends existing auto-install / Zero-Touch Provisioning mechanisms
> to make the process more secure.
> 
> There are no relevant draft nits in the document.
> 
> Though there are a few typos, etc.
> s/There are also a/There is also a/
> s/an auto-install techniques/an auto-install technique/
> s/etc;/etc.;/
> 5x s/e.g/e.g./
> s/operations is/operations are/
> 
> As far as I can see the document has been repeatedly improved and is in good
> shape. I don't see any big issues related to management preventing from
> publication.
> 
> Cheers,
> Mehmet
> 
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