[OSPF] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ospf-link-overload-11
Joel Halpern <jmh@joelhalpern.com> Thu, 04 January 2018 23:32 UTC
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Subject: [OSPF] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ospf-link-overload-11
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Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-ospf-link-overload-11 Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review Date: 2018-01-04 IETF LC End Date: 2018-01-16 IESG Telechat date: 2018-01-25 Summary: This document is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard Major issues: N/A; my concerns from earlier versions have been addressed. Minor issues: I understand the WG likes using the term "overload" for a link being taken out of service. I think people will learn what we mean. I do wish we had not chosen to misuse the words in this fashion. This is much more a graceful-link-close indication (or clsoe-pending indication) than it is an overload indication. Nits/editorial comments:
- [OSPF] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ospf… Joel Halpern
- Re: [OSPF] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-… Acee Lindem (acee)
- Re: [OSPF] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-… Les Ginsberg (ginsberg)
- Re: [OSPF] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-… Acee Lindem (acee)
- Re: [OSPF] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-… Ketan Talaulikar (ketant)
- Re: [OSPF] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-… Les Ginsberg (ginsberg)
- Re: [OSPF] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-… Les Ginsberg (ginsberg)
- Re: [OSPF] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-… Acee Lindem (acee)
- Re: [OSPF] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-… Shraddha Hegde
- Re: [OSPF] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-… Acee Lindem (acee)
- Re: [OSPF] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-… Les Ginsberg (ginsberg)
- Re: [OSPF] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-… bruno.decraene
- Re: [OSPF] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-… Pushpasis Sarkar
- Re: [OSPF] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-… Les Ginsberg (ginsberg)
- Re: [OSPF] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-… Acee Lindem (acee)
- Re: [OSPF] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-… Pushpasis Sarkar
- Re: [OSPF] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-… Jeff Tantsura
- Re: [OSPF] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-… Shraddha Hegde