[OSPF] Stephen Farrell's No Objection on draft-ietf-ospf-two-part-metric-09: (with COMMENT)

["Stephen Farrell" <[e-mail]>]

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draft-ietf-ospf-two-part-metric-09: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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abstract: the text doesn't really explain anything to me.  But
then I'm not familiar with OSPF so maybe it's obvious to
someone who is.

intro: expanding LSA, VPLS etc on 1st use would be better.

3.1, 2nd bullet: the text here was very unclear to me

(All that said, the satellite/mobile ground station example 
does enough to ensure that the overall document is clear
so the above are nitty nits:-)