Re: [OSPF] FW: New Version Notification for draft-xu-ospf-encapsulation-cap-00.txt
Karsten Thomann <karsten_thomann@linfre.de> Tue, 03 March 2015 06:57 UTC
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Subject: Re: [OSPF] FW: New Version Notification for draft-xu-ospf-encapsulation-cap-00.txt
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Hi, some comments: last sentence of section 1: capablity -> capability applicalbe -> applicable Section 3: The Encapsulation Capability TLV could not appear more than once wihin a given OSPF Router Information (RI) Opaque LSA . Would like to change it to SHOULD NOT or better MUST NOT instead of could not and at the end of the sentence is a space which should be removed. Encapsualtion -> Encapsulation Cability -> Capability vairalbe-> variable Section 4: .. -> . at the end of the sentence Regards Karsten Am 03.03.2015 um 03:13 schrieb Xuxiaohu: > Hi all, > > Any comments are welcome. > > Best regards, > Xiaohu > >> -----Original Message----- >> From: internet-drafts@ietf.org [mailto:internet-drafts@ietf.org] >> Sent: Saturday, February 28, 2015 4:21 PM >> To: Uma Chunduri; Luis M. Contreras; Robert Raszuk; Xuxiaohu; Luis M. >> Contreras; Xuxiaohu; Uma Chunduri; Robert Raszuk >> Subject: New Version Notification for draft-xu-ospf-encapsulation-cap-00.txt >> >> >> A new version of I-D, draft-xu-ospf-encapsulation-cap-00.txt >> has been successfully submitted by Xiaohu Xu and posted to the IETF repository. >> >> Name: draft-xu-ospf-encapsulation-cap >> Revision: 00 >> Title: Advertising Encapsulation Capability Using OSPF >> Document date: 2015-02-28 >> Group: Individual Submission >> Pages: 5 >> URL: >> http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-xu-ospf-encapsulation-cap-00.txt >> Status: >> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-xu-ospf-encapsulation-cap/ >> Htmlized: http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-xu-ospf-encapsulation-cap-00 >> >> >> Abstract: >> In a particular network environment where MPLS-SPRING-enabled routers >> are partially deployed, it needs to transport MPLS traffic through an >> IP-based tunnel between two MPLS-SPRING-enabled routers so as to >> traverse non-MPLS routers. The ingress of the IP-based tunnel must >> know which encapsulation type is supported by the egress of that IP- >> based tunnel.This document describes how to advertise the >> encapsulation capability of MPLS-SPRING-enabled routers using OSPF. >> Note that this encapsulation capablity advertisment may be applicalbe >> to other use cases as well. >> >> >> >> >> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission >> until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org. >> >> The IETF Secretariat > _______________________________________________ > OSPF mailing list > OSPF@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ospf