Fwd: AD-review comments on draft-ietf-ospf-2547-dnbit
Acee Lindem <acee@REDBACK.COM> Sun, 21 December 2003 16:10 UTC
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From: Acee Lindem <acee@REDBACK.COM>
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Subject: Fwd: AD-review comments on draft-ietf-ospf-2547-dnbit
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FYI - AD Comments on DN bit drafts. ------- Forwarded message ------- From: Alex Zinin <zinin@psg.com> To: Acee Lindem <acee@redback.com>, Rohit Dube <rohit@utstar.com> Subject: AD-review comments on draft-ietf-ospf-2547-dnbit Date: Fri, 19 Dec 2003 18:31:58 -0800 > Hi guys, > > See my comments below, pls. > Acee, Rohit, feel free to fwd this to the WG mailing list. > > Technical: > > - The "Security Considerations" section needs to be included > > - I assume that the DN bit is set for type-3 and type-5 LSAs > only. Seems that the document needs to spell this out and > state how the DN-bit set to 1 in other LSAs should be treated. > > While fixing the above, please address the following editorial > comments: > > - Please remove citations from the abstract > > - Please include standard IPR and Copyright sections (see RFC 2026 > for more info) > > Thanks > -- Acee