[Pals] Barry Leiba's No Objection on draft-ietf-l2vpn-vpls-pe-etree-10: (with COMMENT)

["Barry Leiba" <[e-mail]>]

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draft-ietf-l2vpn-vpls-pe-etree-10: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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I agree with Ben and Álvaro about the use of 2119 key words to talk about
something that's normatively specified in a MEF document and not here.

Why does the first paragraph of the Introduction specifically mention MEF
6.1, with no reference provided?  There is a reference to MEF 6.2 (but
it's not cited here).  Is something out of sync?  And if so, why is there
no citation in the Introduction?

The MEF documents are cited in the Terminology section (with an incorrect
citation to MEF6.1, which isn't in the references).  That tells me that
they should be normative references, as they're providing definitions of
terminology that has to be understood... but you have them as informative
references.  Why?  (This comment is very close to a DISCUSS, but I'm not
balloting it that way.)