[Pals] Alissa Cooper's No Objection on draft-ietf-pals-status-reduction-04: (with COMMENT)
Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> Tue, 11 April 2017 18:55 UTC
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Subject: [Pals] Alissa Cooper's No Objection on draft-ietf-pals-status-reduction-04: (with COMMENT)
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Alissa Cooper has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-pals-status-reduction-04: No Objection When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-pals-status-reduction/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- >From Dan's Gen-ART review: Nits/editorial comments: 1. In section 8, first paragraph: s/rages/ranges/ 2. In sections 8.3, 8.4 the construct "IETF Review" is worded in three different ways (IETF review, IETF Review, "IETF Review") - better align
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