[payload] Questions on draft-ietf-payload-rfc4695-bis

[Robert Sparks <[e-mail]>]

1) The 2nd line of the ABNF's production rule for nonzero-for-octet 
     (    / (%x30-33 9(DIGIT)))
  allows 10 digit strings with a leading 0 - was that intended, or should this have started %31-33?

2) The following two paragraphs appear in C.6.3 and seem to be redundant - was it an incomplete edit?

The "url" parameter is assigned a double-quoted string representation of
a Uniform Resource Locator (URL) for the data object.  The string MUST
specify either a HyperText Transport Protocol URI (HTTP, [RFC2616]) or
an HTTP over TLS URI (HTTPS, [RFC2818]).  The media type/subtype for the
data object SHOULD be specified in the appropriate HTTP or HTTPS
transport header.

The "url" parameter is assigned a double-quoted string representation of
a Uniform Resource Locator (URL) for the data object.  The string MUST
specify a HyperText Transport Protocol URL (HTTP, [RFC2616]).  HTTP MAY
be used over TCP or MAY be used over a secure network transport, such as
the method described in [RFC2818].  The media type/subtype for the data
object SHOULD be specified in the appropriate HTTP transport header.