[payload] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-payload-rtp-opus-08

Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com> Sat, 11 April 2015 13:23 UTC

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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>

Document:                         draft-ietf-payload-rtp-opus-08

Reviewer:                           Christer Holmberg

Review Date:                     11 April 2015

IETF LC End Date:             17 February 2015

IETF Telechat Date:         9 April 2015

Summary:        Most of the comments I gave on a previous version of the document have been addressed. However, it seems like one of the comments have not been addressed.

Major Issues: None

Minor Issues: I previously gave the following comment:


"Regarding SDP, I think it would be good to have the ABNF syntax for the a=fmtp parameter (currently you only have descriptive text of the different parameters). It makes the life for the parser implementers much easier :)"


I guess one, by reading section 7 and the examples, can figure out how to encode the a=fmtp parameter, but I think it would to explicitly define the syntax.



Editorial nits: None