[Pce] Please publish draft-ietf-pce-disco-proto-ospf-05.txt

"Adrian Farrel" <adrian@olddog.co.uk> Wed, 09 May 2007 09:37 UTC

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Please publish draft-ietf-pce-disco-proto-ospf-05.txt as a 
Standards Track RFC.

Here is the Document Shepherd write-up.

>(1.a)  Who is the Document Shepherd for this document?

        Adrian Farrel <adrian@olddog.co.uk>

>       Has the Document Shepherd personally reviewed this version
>       of the document and, in particular, does he or she believe
>       this version is ready for forwarding to the IESG for
>       publication?
 
        Yes
 
>(1.b)  Has the document had adequate review both from key WG
>       members and from key non-WG members?
 
        Yes. Cross-review to OSPF WG held.
 
>       Does the Document Shepherd have any concerns about the
>       depth or breadth of the reviews that have been performed?
 
        No concerns.
 
>(1.c)  Does the Document Shepherd have concerns that the document
>       needs more review from a particular or broader perspective,
>       e.g., security, operational complexity, someone familiar
>       with AAA, internationalization or XML?
 
        No concerns.
 
>(1.d)  Does the Document Shepherd have any specific concerns or
>       issues with this document that the Responsible Area
>       Director and/or the IESG should be aware of?  For example,
>       perhaps he or she is uncomfortable with certain parts of
>       the document, or has concerns whether there really is a
>       need for it.  In any event, if the WG has discussed those
>       issues and has indicated that it still wishes to advance
>       the document, detail those concerns here.
 
        No concerns.
 
>       Has an IPR disclosure related to this document
>       been filed?  If so, please include a reference to the
>       disclosure and summarize the WG discussion and conclusion
>       on this issue.
 
        None has been filed.
 
>(1.e)  How solid is the WG consensus behind this document?  Does
>       it represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals,
>       with others being silent, or does the WG as a whole
>       understand and agree with it?
 
        WG agrees.
 
>(1.f)  Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated
>       extreme discontent?  If so, please summarise the areas of
>       conflict in separate email messages to the Responsible Area
>       Director.  (It should be in a separate email because this
>       questionnaire is entered into the ID Tracker.)
 
        No.
 
>(1.g)  Has the Document Shepherd personally verified that the
>       document satisfies all ID nits?  (See
>       http://www.ietf.org/ID-Checklist.html and
>       http://tools.ietf.org/tools/idnits/).  Boilerplate checks
>       are not enough; this check needs to be thorough.
 
        Yes.
 
>       Has the document met all formal review criteria it needs
>       to, such as the MIB Doctor, media type and URI type
>       reviews?
 
        Yes.
 
>(1.h)  Has the document split its references into normative and
>       informative?
 
        Yes.
 
>       Are there normative references to documents that
>       are not ready for advancement or are otherwise in an
>       unclear state?  If such normative references exist, what is
>       the strategy for their completion?
 
         There is a normative reference to draft-ietf-ospf-cap that is
         in the RFC Editor Queue.
 
>       Are there normative references that are downward
>       references, as described in [RFC3967]?  If so, list these
>       downward references to support the Area Director in the
>       Last Call procedure for them [RFC3967].
 
        No.
 
>(1.i)  Has the Document Shepherd verified that the document IANA
>       consideration section exists and is consistent with the
>       body of the document?  If the document specifies protocol
>       extensions, are reservations requested in appropriate IANA
>       registries?  Are the IANA registries clearly identified?
>       If the document creates a new registry, does it define the
>       proposed initial contents of the registry and an allocation
>       procedure for future registrations?  Does it suggest a
>       reasonable name for the new registry?  See [RFC2434].
 
        IANA section is correct.

        IANA allocation is dependent on the registries created for
        draft-ietf-ospf-cap that is in the RFC Editor Queue. 
        Identification of the registries is, therefore, necessarily
        slightly ambiguous.
 
>       If the document describes an Expert Review process has
>       Shepherd conferred with the Responsible Area Director so
>       that the IESG can appoint the needed Expert during the IESG
>       Evaluation?
 
        None required.
 
>(1.j)  Has the Document Shepherd verified that sections of the
>       document that are written in a formal language, such as XML
>       code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, etc., validate correctly
>       in an automated checker?
 
        Not applicable.
 
>(1.k)  The IESG approval announcement includes a Document
>       Announcement Write-Up.  Please provide such a Document
>       Announcement Write-Up?  Recent examples can be found in the
>       "Action" announcements for approved documents.  The
>       approval announcement contains the following sections:

> Technical Summary

   There are various circumstances where it is highly desirable for a
   Path Computation Client (PCC) to be able to dynamically and
   automatically discover a set of Path Computation Elements (PCE),
   along with some information that can be used for PCE selection. When
   the PCE is a Label Switching Router (LSR) participating in the
   Interior Gateway Protocol (IGP), or even a server participating
   passively in the IGP, a simple and efficient way to discover PCEs
   consists of using IGP flooding. For that purpose, this document
   defines extensions to the Open Shortest Path First (OSPF) routing
   protocol for the advertisement of PCE Discovery information within an
   OSPF area or within the entire OSPF routing domain.

> Working Group Summary

  The Working Group had consensus on this document.

> Document Quality

  The protocol extensions have been implemented multiple times.

> Personnel
>
> Who is the Document Shepherd for this document?

  Adrian Farrel <adrian@olddog.co.uk>

> Who is the Responsible Area Director(s)?

  Ross Callon, David Ward.

> Is an IANA expert needed?

  No.


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