Re: [Pce] Regarding draft-ietf-pce-questions-05

"Adrian Farrel" <adrian@olddog.co.uk> Tue, 03 June 2014 12:24 UTC

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From: Adrian Farrel <adrian@olddog.co.uk>
To: 'Dhruv Dhody' <dhruv.dhody@huawei.com>, draft-ietf-pce-questions@tools.ietf.org
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Well, I got tired waiting for an answer so I posted an update anyway.

Dhruv, I want to thank you for your detailed and thoughtful review.

The only change I didn't make was:

> >    Sec 24. Where Does Policy Fit In?
> >
> >         - An Active PCE must have a policy relationship with its LSRs to
> >         determine which LSPs can be modified or triggered, and what LSP
> >         delegation is supported.
> >
> >       Is 'what LSP' intentional? Shouldn't this be 'which LSP'?

Yes. Pedant alert :-)

Cheers,
Adrian (looking forward to seeing the publication request made)