[Pce] Mirja Kühlewind's No Objection on draft-ietf-pce-gmpls-pcep-extensions-13: (with COMMENT)

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Mirja Kühlewind has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-pce-gmpls-pcep-extensions-13: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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Purely editorial comment:
I would recommend to move most of the gap analysis of section 1 (actually most
of the text of the whole section) into the appendix and only summarise the
extensions specified in this doc instead.

nit:
sec 6: s/In order to protect against against the malicious PCE case/In order to
protect against the malicious PCE case/ -> 2x against