[Pce] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-pce-pcep-stateful-pce-gmpls-21
Stewart Bryant via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Fri, 02 June 2023 09:28 UTC
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Subject: [Pce] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-pce-pcep-stateful-pce-gmpls-21
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Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/gen/GenArtFAQ>. Document: draft-ietf-pce-pcep-stateful-pce-gmpls-21 Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review Date: 2023-06-02 IETF LC End Date: 2023-05-29 IESG Telechat date: 2023-06-08 Summary: I reviewed this from a GenArt perspective (a reader new to the area) and have one request : that early in the document a few sentences be added (copied from another text) clarifying the difference between stateless and stateful PCE. This document is otherwise ready to pass to the RFC Editor team. I note that id-nits picks up a number of errors regarding references (RFC 2119 language and technical references), but the ones I checked seem correct, so I am not sure what is happening. Major issues: None Minor issues: The absence of an early description of stateful PCE as noted above. Nits/editorial comments: Further discussion of concept of a stateful PCE can be found in SB> of the concept For passive stateful PCEs, Path Computation Request (PCReq)/ Path Computation Reply (PCRep) messages are used to request for path computation. SB> grammar problem
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