Re: [Pce] 答复: I-D Action: draft-ietf-pce-pcep-extension-native-ip-28.txt

[Dhruv Dhody <[e-mail]>]

Hi Aijun,

I did one more pass. This time I have gone ahead and made an update and
created -29 xml directly (to save up on back and forth time). If you are
happy with the changes that I have made please go ahead and post it and we
should be ready to send this to IESG/John.

The main changes are -

(1) Two error conditions related to the capability exchange are added
(2) RBNF was incorrect, we need both CCI and one of the (BPI, EPR and PPA)
objects. It was mistakenly sending either CCI or (BPI, EPR and PPA) objects
before!
(3) Figures were crossing 72 characters limit and thus reformatted
(4) The order of message exchange for EPR was incorrect in the figures
(5) IANA considerations was updated
(6) Many editorial changes

Please find the attached files.

Thanks!
Dhruv



On Wed, Nov 15, 2023 at 2:27 PM Aijun Wang <[e-mail]>
wrote:

> Hi, Dhruv and All:
>
> We updated the draft to address the comments received during the IETF 118
> meeting.
> The main update contents are the followings:
> 1) Add the explanation of "Raw Mode" and "Tunnel Mode"
> 2) Add the "error code" field within the BPI object and the definition of
> "error code"
> 3) Some editorial updates.
>
> Please let me know if the above updates address your concerns?
>
>
> Best Regards
>
> Aijun Wang
> China Telecom
>
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> Internet-Draft draft-ietf-pce-pcep-extension-native-ip-28.txt is now
> available. It is a work item of the Path Computation Element (PCE) WG of
> the
> IETF.
>
>    Title:   Path Computation Element Communication Protocol (PCEP)
> Extensions for Native IP Networks
>    Authors: Aijun Wang
>             Boris Khasanov
>             Sheng Fang
>             Ren Tan
>             Chun Zhu
>    Name:    draft-ietf-pce-pcep-extension-native-ip-28.txt
>    Pages:   33
>    Dates:   2023-11-15
>
> Abstract:
>
>    This document defines the Path Computation Element Communication
>    Protocol (PCEP) extension for Central Control Dynamic Routing (CCDR)
>    based applications in Native IP networks.  It describes the key
>    information that is transferred between Path Computation Element
>    (PCE) and Path Computation Clients (PCC) to accomplish the End to End
>    (E2E) traffic assurance in the Native IP network under PCE as a
>    central controller.
>
> The IETF datatracker status page for this Internet-Draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-pce-pcep-extension-native-ip/
>
> There is also an HTMLized version available at:
>
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-pce-pcep-extension-native-i
> p-28
> <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-pce-pcep-extension-native-ip-28>
>
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
>
> https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-pce-pcep-extension-nati
> ve-ip-28
> <https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-pce-pcep-extension-native-ip-28>
>
> Internet-Drafts are also available by rsync at:
> rsync.ietf.org::internet-drafts
>
>
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