[Pce] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-pce-association-bidir-12: (with COMMENT)
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Subject: [Pce] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-pce-association-bidir-12: (with COMMENT)
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Murray Kucherawy has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-pce-association-bidir-12: No Objection When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-pce-association-bidir/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- I agree with Barry that the Abstract in its current form feels kind of cluttered. Anything we could do to tidy that up would help. I wonder how it might look with all the acronyms removed, and instead introduce them down in the Introduction or later sections. Alvaro also raises a good point, and I'd like to see that addressed somehow.
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