[PCN] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC5670 (1968)

RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> Mon, 21 December 2009 13:14 UTC

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Subject: [PCN] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC5670 (1968)
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The following errata report has been submitted for RFC5670,
"Metering and Marking Behaviour of PCN-Nodes".

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You may review the report below and at:
http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=5670&eid=1968

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Type: Technical
Reported by: Alfred Hoenes <ah@TR-Sys.de>

Section: A.2

Original Text
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   A token bucket with the following parameters:

      *  PCN-excess-rate: token rate of token bucket (bits/second)

|     *  BS_etm: depth of TB in token bucket (bits)

      *  lastUpdate: time the token bucket was last updated (seconds)

      *  F_etm: amount of tokens in token bucket (bits)


Corrected Text
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   A token bucket with the following parameters:

      *  PCN-excess-rate: token rate of token bucket (bits/second)

|     *  BS_etm: depth of token bucket (bits)

      *  lastUpdate: time the token bucket was last updated (seconds)

      *  F_etm: amount of tokens in token bucket (bits)


Notes
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Rationale: "TB" does not appear anywhere else in the document.
  The RFC text looks like a shift in terminology has not been
  performed consistently.  Dropping "TB in" seems appropriate
  and consistent in style with the surrounding text.

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RFC5670 (draft-ietf-pcn-marking-behaviour-05)
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Title               : Metering and Marking Behaviour of PCN-Nodes
Publication Date    : November 2009
Author(s)           : P. Eardley, Ed.
Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
Source              : Congestion and Pre-Congestion Notification
Area                : Transport
Stream              : IETF
Verifying Party     : IESG