Re: [pcp] WGLC: draft-ietf-pcp-optimize-keepalives-04 comments due by NOV 10

Dave Thaler <dthaler@microsoft.com> Mon, 27 October 2014 19:22 UTC

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From: Dave Thaler <dthaler@microsoft.com>
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Thread-Topic: [pcp] WGLC: draft-ietf-pcp-optimize-keepalives-04 comments due by NOV 10
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Subject: Re: [pcp] WGLC: draft-ietf-pcp-optimize-keepalives-04 comments due by NOV 10
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I have reviewed this draft and have only editorial comments, which can be found
in the marked up copy at
http://research.microsoft.com/~dthaler/draft-ietf-pcp-optimize-keepalives-04.pdf

-Dave

From: pcp [mailto:pcp-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Dave Thaler
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Subject: [pcp] WGLC: draft-ietf-pcp-optimize-keepalives-04 comments due by NOV 10

This email initiates a Working Group Last Call on draft-ietf-pcp-optimize-keepalives-04 to conclude on
Monday, November 10th at the PCP WG meeting in Honolulu.  Please send comments to the list.

As a reminder, when responding to a WGLC, what we chairs are looking for is a statement about 
document quality (not really about whether the mechanism should move forward).  That is, 
state whether you think the document is ready as is, or if not, what issues you see.

Thanks,
-Dave