Re: [pim] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-pim-assert-packing-08
Toerless Eckert <tte@cs.fau.de> Thu, 09 March 2023 02:06 UTC
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Date: Thu, 09 Mar 2023 03:05:32 +0100
From: Toerless Eckert <tte@cs.fau.de>
To: Ines Robles <mariainesrobles@googlemail.com>
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Subject: Re: [pim] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-pim-assert-packing-08
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Thanks, Index
All fix incorporated into -09.
Cheers
Toerless
On Thu, Mar 02, 2023 at 04:06:18PM -0800, Ines Robles via Datatracker wrote:
> Reviewer: Ines Robles
> Review result: Ready with Nits
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> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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> Document: draft-ietf-pim-assert-packing-08
> Reviewer: Ines Robles
> Review Date: 2023-03-02
> IETF LC End Date: 2023-03-02
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
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> Summary:
>
> This document defines a mechanism to send and receive information for multiple
> IP multicast flows in a single PackedAssert message.
>
> I have not found major issues in this document.
>
> Major issues: None
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> Minor issues: None
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> Nits/editorial comments:
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> Missing caption for Figure 9 and Figure 10
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> Thanks for this document,
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> Ines.
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