Re: [pim] Lars Eggert's No Objection on draft-ietf-pim-bfd-p2mp-use-case-09: (with COMMENT)

[Greg Mirsky <[e-mail]>]

Hi Lars,
thank you for the review. I agree with your suggestion and update the
working version accordingly.

Regards,
Greg

On Mon, Nov 29, 2021 at 3:58 AM Lars Eggert via Datatracker <
[e-mail]> wrote:

> Lars Eggert has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-pim-bfd-p2mp-use-case-09: No Objection
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> COMMENT:
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> Thanks to Meral Shirazipour for their General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
> review
> (https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/3VY7s4HnPhPf8ijxLhhh9gHNp10
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> All comments below are about very minor potential issues that you may
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> address in some way - or ignore - as you see fit. Some were flagged by
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> you
> did with these suggestions.
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> Section 2.1. , paragraph 5, nit:
> > affecting the PIM state in any way. Thus the tail stops using BFD to
> monitor
> >                                     ^^^^
> A comma may be missing after the conjunctive/linking adverb "Thus".
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