[ppsp] reqeusting review and comments on draft-ietf-ppsp-problem-statement-09.txt

zhangyunfei <zhangyunfei@chinamobile.com> Mon, 02 July 2012 02:49 UTC

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Subject: [ppsp] reqeusting review and comments on draft-ietf-ppsp-problem-statement-09.txt
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Hi folks,
    According to the IESG review comments by David, we update a new version of the problem statements and request review and comments. Please check the following link for the details:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ppsp-problem-statement.
The main changes are:
1) Largely shorten the pages on the explanatory descriptions on the principles of p2p streaming all the document, esp. in section 1 and  4.
2) Reconstruct section 3 with more clear and explicit problems.
3) Add a new subsection 4.1 according to David's comments to elaborate the tracker protocol and peer protocol's problems( i.e., design space). 

Thanks.

BR
Yunfei 




zhangyunfei

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Date: 2012-07-02 10:37
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Subject: [ppsp] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ppsp-problem-statement-09.txt

A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
 This draft is a work item of the Peer to Peer Streaming Protocol Working Group of the IETF.

Title           : Problem Statement and Requirements of Peer-to-Peer Streaming Protocol (PPSP)
Author(s)       : Yunfei Zhang
                          Ning Zong
Filename        : draft-ietf-ppsp-problem-statement-09.txt
Pages           : 26
Date            : 2012-07-01

Abstract:
   Peer-to-Peer (P2P for short) streaming systems show more and more
   popularity in current Internet with proprietary protocols. This
   document identifies problems of the proprietary protocols, proposes a
   Peer to Peer Streaming Protocol (PPSP) including tracker and peer
   signaling, and discusses the design scope, requirements and uses
   cases of PPSP.


The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ppsp-problem-statement

There's also a htmlized version available at:
http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ppsp-problem-statement-09

A diff from previous version is available at:
http://tools.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-ppsp-problem-statement-09


Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/

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