Re: [precis] Document Shepherd Write-Up for draft-ietf-precis-problem-statement-08
Peter Saint-Andre <stpeter@stpeter.im> Tue, 09 October 2012 14:36 UTC
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Subject: Re: [precis] Document Shepherd Write-Up for draft-ietf-precis-problem-statement-08
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-----BEGIN PGP SIGNED MESSAGE----- Hash: SHA1 On 10/8/12 10:16 PM, Pete Resnick wrote: > On 9/20/12 1:23 PM, Peter Saint-Andre wrote: >> In accordance with RFC 4858, here is the Document Shepherd >> Write-Up for "Stringprep Revision and PRECIS Problem Statement" >> (draft-ietf-precis-problem-statement-08). >> > > I only had one AD Evaluation comment. Please handle it as a Last > Call comment. > > Comment: Please strike section 2. There are no 2119 terms in this > document. Actually, there are some of those terms in the appendices, which it seems have copied some text from the relevant RFCs. I would encourage the authors to modify that text so that it no longer contains any of the conformance keywords, because the "background information" subsections of several appendices don't seem normative to me... Peter - -- Peter Saint-Andre https://stpeter.im/ -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG/MacGPG2 v2.0.18 (Darwin) Comment: Using GnuPG with Mozilla - http://www.enigmail.net/ iEYEARECAAYFAlB0NpsACgkQNL8k5A2w/vxiYQCgy+RBVt8mdeLCwJwu0gGdySsR TKwAoIEe2IuOo71j5yBcguEEqnqFp67F =njCu -----END PGP SIGNATURE-----
- [precis] Document Shepherd Write-Up for draft-iet… Peter Saint-Andre
- Re: [precis] Document Shepherd Write-Up for draft… Pete Resnick
- Re: [precis] Document Shepherd Write-Up for draft… Peter Saint-Andre