[PWE3] PROTO Statement: draft-ietf-pwe3-cep-mib-12
Danny McPherson <danny@tcb.net> Thu, 24 January 2008 21:29 UTC
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PROTO Statement: draft-ietf-pwe3-cep-mib-12 The PWE3 Chairs would like to request Standards Track publication of this document. (1.a) Who is the Document Shepherd for this document? Has the Document Shepherd personally reviewed this version of the document and, in particular, does he or she believe this version is ready for forwarding to the IESG for publication? Danny McPherson (danny@tcb.net) is the Shepherd. I have reviewed the document and it is ready for publication. (1.b) Has the document had adequate review both from key WG members and from key non-WG members? Does the Document Shepherd have any concerns about the depth or breadth of the reviews that have been performed? This document (-10 revision) has been reviewed by the WG, both through the LC process (ending 2007-06-22), and at IETF WG meetings. There were minor comments during the two week LC that has completed. All other comments were addressed in response to the LC query and seem to have satisfied the initiators. I have no concerns about state of readiness of this document. (1.c) Does the Document Shepherd have concerns that the document needs more review from a particular or broader perspective, e.g., security, operational complexity, someone familiar with AAA, internationalization or XML? I have no concerns regarding the requirement for further review of this document, although MIB Doctor review needs to occur and a good bit of coordination has already occurred on that front per MIB Doctor author participation on this document. (1.d) Does the Document Shepherd have any specific concerns or issues with this document that the Responsible Area Director and/or the IESG should be aware of? For example, perhaps he or she is uncomfortable with certain parts of the document, or From pwe3-bounces@ietf.org Thu Jan 24 16:29:03 2008 Return-path: <pwe3-bounces@ietf.org> Received: from [127.0.0.1] (helo=stiedprmman1.va.neustar.com) by megatron.ietf.org with esmtp (Exim 4.43) id 1JI9d7-0001Y3-Ox; Thu, 24 Jan 2008 16:29:01 -0500 Received: from pwe3 by megatron.ietf.org with local (Exim 4.43) id 1JI9d6-0001Xu-As for pwe3-confirm+ok@megatron.ietf.org; Thu, 24 Jan 2008 16:29:00 -0500 Received: from [10.90.34.44] (helo=chiedprmail1.ietf.org) by megatron.ietf.org with esmtp (Exim 4.43) id 1JI9d5-0001Xm-VL; Thu, 24 Jan 2008 16:29:00 -0500 Received: from dog.tcb.net ([64.78.150.133]) by chiedprmail1.ietf.org with esmtp (Exim 4.43) id 1JI9d5-00043I-2r; Thu, 24 Jan 2008 16:28:59 -0500 Received: by dog.tcb.net (Postfix, from userid 0) id 8F36E2680CE; Thu, 24 Jan 2008 14:28:58 -0700 (MST) Received: from [10.111.102.1] (division.aa.arbor.net [152.160.38.65]) (authenticated-user smtp) (TLSv1/SSLv3 AES128-SHA 128/128) by dog.tcb.net with SMTP; Thu, 24 Jan 2008 14:28:57 -0700 (MST) (envelope-from danny@tcb.net) Mime-Version: 1.0 (Apple Message framework v753) Content-Type: text/plain; charset=US-ASCII; delsp=yes; format=flowed Message-Id: <FDA05483-C1BA-40D5-A1CA-DBB5FC5F8EB2@tcb.net> Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit From: Danny McPherson <danny@tcb.net> Date: Thu, 24 Jan 2008 14:28:41 -0700 To: ietf-secretary@ietf.org X-Mailer: Apple Mail (2.753) X-Spam-Score: 0.0 (/) X-Scan-Signature: 202a3ece0492a8c7e7c8672d5214398f Cc: Thomas Nadeau <tom.nadeau@bt.com>, David Zelig <davidz@corrigent.com>, pwe3 <pwe3@ietf.org>, Mark Townsley <townsley@cisco.com>, Stewart Bryant <stbryant@cisco.com> Subject: [PWE3] PROTO Statement: draft-ietf-pwe3-cep-mib-12 X-BeenThere: pwe3@ietf.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Pseudo Wires Edge to Edge <pwe3.ietf.org> List-Unsubscribe: <https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/pwe3>, <mailto:pwe3-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe> List-Post: <mailto:pwe3@ietf.org> List-Help: <mailto:pwe3-request@ietf.org?subject=help> List-Subscribe: <https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/pwe3>, <mailto:pwe3-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe> Errors-To: pwe3-bounces@ietf.org PROTO Statement: draft-ietf-pwe3-cep-mib-12 The PWE3 Chairs would like to request Standards Track publication of this document. (1.a) Who is the Document Shepherd for this document? Has the Document Shepherd personally reviewed this version of the document and, in particular, does he or she believe this version is ready for forwarding to the IESG for publication? Danny McPherson (danny@tcb.net) is the Shepherd. I have reviewed the document and it is ready for publication. (1.b) Has the document had adequate review both from key WG members and from key non-WG members? Does the Document Shepherd have any concerns about the depth or breadth of the reviews that have been performed? This document (-10 revision) has been reviewed by the WG, both through the LC process (ending 2007-06-22), and at IETF WG meetings. There were minor comments during the two week LC that has completed. All other comments were addressed in response to the LC query and seem to have satisfied the initiators. I have no concerns about state of readiness of this document. (1.c) Does the Document Shepherd have concerns that the document needs more review from a particular or broader perspective, e.g., security, operational complexity, someone familiar with AAA, internationalization or XML? I have no concerns regarding the requirement for further review of this document, although MIB Doctor review needs to occur and a good bit of coordination has already occurred on that front per MIB Doctor author participation on this document. (1.d) Does the Document Shepherd have any specific concerns or issues with this document that the Responsible Area Director and/or the IESG should be aware of? For example, perhaps he or she is uncomfortable with certain parts of the document, or has concerns whether there really is a need for it. In any event, if the WG has discussed those issues and has indicated that it still wishes to advance the document, detail those concerns here. I have no specific concerns about this document, nor are there concerns that should be conveyed to the IESG or Responsible AD. (1.e) How solid is the WG consensus behind this document? Does it represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or does the WG as a whole understand and agree with it? This document is fully understood and supported by the PWE3 WG. There is no contention as to whether this work provides utility and it is generally supported across the WG. (1.f) Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If so, please summarise the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the Responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this questionnaire is entered into the ID Tracker.) No one has indicated to the WG chairs or WG mailing list that they have intentions of appealing any proposed publication of this document. (1.g) Has the Document Shepherd personally verified that the document satisfies all ID nits? (See http://www.ietf.org/ID-Checklist.html and http://tools.ietf.org/tools/idnits/). Boilerplate checks are not enough; this check needs to be thorough. Has the document met all formal review criteria it needs to, such as the MIB Doctor, media type and URI type reviews? No. MIB Doctor review has been initiated, although not yet complete. There has been involvement of MIB Doctor folks with this document already. (1.h) Has the document split its references into normative and informative? Yes. Are there normative references to documents that are not ready for advancement or are otherwise in an unclear state? If such normative references exist, what is the strategy for their completion? Are there normative references that are downward references, as described in [RFC3967]? If so, list these downward references to support the Area Director in the Last Call procedure for them [RFC3967]. No. Normative references to PWMIB and PWTC are only comments, with both documents currently in the IESG Processing queue. (1.i) Has the Document Shepherd verified that the document IANA consideration section exists and is consistent with the body of the document? If the document specifies protocol extensions, are reservations requested in appropriate IANA registries? Are the IANA registries clearly identified? If the document creates a new registry, does it define the proposed initial contents of the registry and an allocation procedure for future registrations? Does it suggested a reasonable name for the new registry? See [I-D.narten-iana-considerations-rfc2434bis]. If the document describes an Expert Review process has Shepherd conferred with the Responsible Area Director so that the IESG can appoint the needed Expert during the IESG Evaluation? The IANA Consideration Section of the document provides the following IANA and RFC Editor Guidance, which we believe to be straight-forward and reasonable: --- The MIB module in this document uses the following IANA-assigned OBJECT IDENTIFIER values recorded in the SMI Numbers registry: Descriptor OBJECT IDENTIFIER value ---------- ----------------------- pwCepStdMIB { mib-2 XXXX } Editor's Note (to be removed prior to publication): The IANA is requested to assign a value for "XXXX" under the 'mib-2' subtree and to record the assignment in the SMI Numbers registry. When the has concerns whether there really is a need for it. In any event, if the WG has discussed those issues and has indicated that it still wishes to advance the document, detail those concerns here. I have no specific concerns about this document, nor are there concerns that should be conveyed to the IESG or Responsible AD. (1.e) How solid is the WG consensus behind this document? Does it represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or does the WG as a whole understand and agree with it? This document is fully understood and supported by the PWE3 WG. There is no contention as to whether this work provides utility and it is generally supported across the WG. (1.f) Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If so, please summarise the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the Responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this questionnaire is entered into the ID Tracker.) No one has indicated to the WG chairs or WG mailing list that they have intentions of appealing any proposed publication of this document. (1.g) Has the Document Shepherd personally verified that the document satisfies all ID nits? (See http://www.ietf.org/ID-Checklist.html and http://tools.ietf.org/tools/idnits/). Boilerplate checks are not enough; this check needs to be thorough. Has the document met all formal review criteria it needs to, such as the MIB Doctor, media type and URI type reviews? No. MIB Doctor review has been initiated, although not yet complete. There has been involvement of MIB Doctor folks with this document already. (1.h) Has the document split its references into normative and informative? Yes. Are there normative references to documents that are not ready for advancement or are otherwise in an unclear state? If such normative references exist, what is the strategy for their completion? Are there normative references that are downward references, as described in [RFC3967]? If so, list these downward references to support the Area Director in the Last Call procedure for them [RFC3967]. No. Normative references to PWMIB and PWTC are only comments, with both documents currently in the IESG Processing queue. (1.i) Has the Document Shepherd verified that the document IANA consideration section exists and is consistent with the body of the document? If the document specifies protocol extensions, are reservations requested in appropriate IANA registries? Are the IANA registries clearly identified? If the document creates a new registry, does it define the proposed initial contents of the registry and an allocation procedure for future registrations? Does it suggested a reasonable name for the new registry? See [I-D.narten-iana-considerations-rfc2434bis]. If the document describes an Expert Review process has Shepherd conferred with the Responsible Area Director so that the IESG can appoint the needed Expert during the IESG Evaluation? The IANA Consideration Section of the document provides the following IANA and RFC Editor Guidance, which we believe to be straight-forward and reasonable: --- The MIB module in this document uses the following IANA-assigned OBJECT IDENTIFIER values recorded in the SMI Numbers registry: Descriptor OBJECT IDENTIFIER value ---------- ----------------------- pwCepStdMIB { mib-2 XXXX } Editor's Note (to be removed prior to publication): The IANA is requested to assign a value for "XXXX" under the 'mib-2' subtree and to record the assignment in the SMI Numbers registry. When the assignment has been made, the RFC Editor is asked to replace "XXXX" (here and in the MIB module) with the assigned value and to remove this note. --- (1.j) Has the Document Shepherd verified that sections of the document that are written in a formal language, such as XML code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, etc., validate correctly in an automated checker? No, although we have verified this with the authors. We have also initiated MIB Doctor review on this document. (1.k) The IESG approval announcement includes a Document Announcement Write-Up. Please provide such a Document Announcement Writeup? Recent examples can be found in the "Action" announcements for approved documents. The approval announcement contains the following sections: Technical Summary This memo defines a portion of the Management Information Base (MIB) for use with network management protocols in the Internet community. In particular, it describes managed objects for modeling SONET/SDH circuits over a Packet Switch Network (PSN). Working Group Summary This document has been reviewed by the experts in the PWE3 WG and there are no outstanding issues. Protocol Quality This is a very simple and well written, no protocol issues are anticipated and no outstanding technical issues exist.. Personnel Who is the Document Shepherd for this document? Danny McPherson (danny@tcb.net) Who is the Responsible Area Director? 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