[quicwg/base-drafts] "Between when" is an awkward wording (#3378)

Dmitri Tikhonov <notifications@github.com> Wed, 22 January 2020 14:48 UTC

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The wording "between when ... and when..." or "between when ... and ..." is odd.  There are two instances of this in [the transport draft](https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-quic-transport-25).

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